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A great description of what I presume is space combat. It took me a while to figure out what the whale was. A ship or a creature? My brother has a book on Amazon you might like called “Persephone- First Contact.”

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I wanted it to start out technical - ships, weapons, physics, all that - and then slowly transform into something more organic, more predatory, as the story progresses. That’s why the “fat colony ship” becomes “the whale” at some point. I’m hoping the imagery landed!

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It did. When the debris was metal shards and not organic.

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