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Victor Jimenez's avatar

Great conclusion, definitely reminds me of the serials of the past. Good job!

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James Kenwood's avatar

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. It turned out at just under 14k words for the entire set of nine chapters, and I’m thinking that if I can repeat that for the second installment - The Crystal Caves of Qal’th - as well as the third (name TBC), then I’d have the kernel of a short novella right there.

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Victor Jimenez's avatar

Looking forward to them. It certainly left those open.

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Parrish Baker's avatar

Bravo!

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James Kenwood's avatar

(said in an appropriately French accent)

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