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Jane Dougherty's avatar

Interesting that there is no dialogue here. The current tendency is for almost only dialogue in the mistaken belief that dialogue = showing not telling. I dislike pages and pages of dialogue because it feels like reading a comic. The effect of no dialogue at all though is to make the text very dense, and as it's full of action, I'd have thought dialogue would lighten it a bit. Question of style, I suppose.

I'm going to ask a cheeky question now. How did you (the narrator) know how to spell Qal'th, given that you have only heard it spoken?

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I really must find the time to read this! I'll see how tomorrow goes.

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